Recount Writing-On Saturday

This is the published copy of my writing
I am learning to use the correct structure and language
for recount writing.

On Saturday I came home on mum’s car

from where I used to live. 

I felt happy to see my nana. When I got out of the car,

I was at the boot with my nana

helping her pack her bag and with mum. 

Next, I went in the hotel to go to bed.

After that, in the morning, I went to McDonalds.

I had a great time.

Then I came home on mum’s car. 

Finally, I went to bed.